Which Tag to Use

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I haven't forgotten about you guys--not at all! I've just been buried in revisions and a long list of other things. Story of a writer's life:)

Charli Mac...this one's for you:)

Instead of using dialogue tags, how about showing readers what is happening instead?

Let's try to replace some dialogue tags with action tags. 

For instance rather than telling the reader "she barked" how about using a visual instead? 

Aka action tag. i.e Her nostrils flared and her eyebrows drew together. OR she threw the glass at the door.

Show some character. 

And please, PLEASE try to avoid using adverbs in dialogue tags. Often times you will just be repeating exactly what you showed in between the quotes.

Again instead of saying "angrily" how about showing what that person looked like. One of my absolute fave sites that I use EVERY day is THE BOOKSHELF MUSE. Angela does a superb job at listing endless ways of how to show readers what emotion and visuals can do.

Also, here is an excellent post on How to Avoid Creative Dialogue Tag Syndrome

Another awesome post I recommend reading is at Writing world:

The Use and Abuse of Dialogue Tags

And last, but not least HERE is a AWESOME site on everything about writing. Hundreds of useful articles sure to help every writer through their journey.

(Shout out to my wonderful cp, Mika Temple for urging me to share the link with you on my blog.)

Usually, when writing dialogue tags, the best and easiest words to use is "said." It may sound boring, but they say eyes skim these words allowing readers to flow with the story and not stalling.

How about you, any tips that has helped you with writing tags?

Happy writing everyone!!

Ways to Enjoy the Ride

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Writing can be a roller coaster ride. One day it's praise, the next day it's criticism.

Sort of like a new mother. Let me give you a scenario.

An exhausted mother gives birth to a new baby (a manuscript) and the people around her (cps/readers/friends with eagle eyes) gives her feedback. Some will take the time out and think carefully about how to put the whirlwind of thoughts into kind words.

And some, instead of praising the beauty of her newborn, are more than ready to point out all the flaws— crooked mouth, odd head shape, webbed toes etc. without carefully thinking about how the words flow out.

Sure, it's gonna hurt. A lot.
No doubt about it.

I have to say, I've been pretty fortunate. I have some really AWESOME cps and they have all been there to lend a helping hand.

But rejection, no matter how minor it is can still hurt. So how do you cope through it and get back on the thrill of the ride?

Here are some tips:

· Take a breather.First of all, after the tears dry out, look at the person's comments with an open heart. Chances are that all you needed to do is take a day or so away and come back, analyzing it with fresh eyes. You'll be surprised on how much your ms can be improved just by taking a breather.

· You're in good company.
EVERY writer experiences this at one time or another. And every writer will ALWAYS have to go through it. The trick is learning how to deal with it and never giving up. Just remember, it happens to EVERYONE.

· Get more than one opinion.But don't make yourself go crazy with too much feedback! Three at the most, should help you decide what needs to be done.

· Is it an opinion or fact that this person is pointing out?

Make certain the comments are craft worthy and not just a mere opinion. Ask specific details. Don't be scared to ask their feedback on how to fix what they assume is broken.

· Let it sink in.Don't rush to take every suggestion to heart. Think about it. Carefully. Make a list of things that can solve the inconsistencies or problems. Make a list of pros and cons. And don't forget to ask a few other trusted friends for their opinions.

· Remember, it's your baby and none else's.
You are the creator. Follow your heart. If it doesn't feel right, it may not be. You know your story more than anyone else. And please don't forget to take a breather! Even roller coaster enthusiasts have to take breathers.

Happy writing, and remember, the sting of criticism only lasts a short while. Trust me!!

How do YOU deal with the bumps in writing?

Verbs and Dialogue

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Looking for that write word?

Deanna Carlyle has an awesome page on her site: 1000 Verbs to Write By

I set this baby in my tool bar. It comes in handy!

Thank you, Deanna!

Or are you having difficulties on writing Dialogue? Or simply want to understand it better.

Punctuation, tags, and varying the structure of dialogue can get confusing. Especially if you are new at the game.

Click HERE for a VERY helpful 13 page PDF. It gets the confusion on dialogue set straight. I wish I had this years ago when I first started writing!

HAPPY WRITING!!!!